I knew you were the one when you get my sarcasm 3/5 stars Overall Impression: 2.5 stars – It was okay He didn’t do anything really special with any of the voices or the emotions but managed to read in a way that the story was the focus and not the narration. 2.5 of 5 stars Narration Michael Stellman did a fine job with the narration. The sex was way hot but maybe (dare I say it?) almost too much. I did not love the romance and felt it was mediocre at best. I enjoyed the characters and thought they were fun, including the secondary characters. The writing was good but it really could have been a shorter book. There was a lot of funny dialog and hot sex but the emotional connection needed to make me feel something for either MC just wasn’t there. Does he even like her? Why is he with her? Why is she so easy to abandon? Why is he spying on her? Why would he go BACK to her? I got really, really tired of the “I love this”, “I can’t do this”, but “I love this”, but “I’m not gay”, but “I love this”… etc. ** I never understood the relationship Jordan had with his girlfriend/fiancée/ex. In the middle of all that there is lots and lots of witty banter and really hot GFY/first-time-with-a-man sex… lots of it. He is super attracted to Mac and the two end up in this very long, drawn out on again/off again romance that ends up in a very unsatisfying HFN. Mac is a PI hired by Jordan to spy on his girlfriend, who he thinks is cheating. Now Jordan must decide if he can go against everything he's ever known to have the only love he's ever wanted. Despite Jordan's denial, it's not long before he can no longer resist the strong undercurrents pulling them together. But for the first time in his life, he has to admit the impossible: another man is getting his engine running on all cylinders. Jordan has always been the high achiever, a man who lives in a focused, controlled, and carefully constructed manner. So why's he so inexplicably drawn to his new client? Relationships aren't up his alley, never have been. Of course Mackenzie has never been accused of doing the smart thing. Perfect away (don't let the door hit you on the rump, thank you very much), and forget he exists. The smart thing would be to thank Jordan for his time, turn Mr. In fact Jordan Channing is looking for a PI to follow his fiance. There's only one itty bitty problem: the guy's not exactly gay.

Private investigator Mackenzie Williams' newest client is everything he's looking for in a guy-charming, beautiful, intelligent, and successful.

Chrysalis by S.E. Harmon